January 30, 2006

Verse again, verse again.

I wrote this one about a month ago. It's meant to be read aloud, but I suppose I'll let it slide if you prefer to keep it in your head.

Unwound

you are predictable
like clock staccato
from across the room.

tick
for a while
tick
it felt like
tick
there was
tick
comfort in
tick
that noise.
tick

and suddenly I knew
the sharp sound only
counted toward the end.

2 Comments:

Blogger Anonymous Me said...

I really like this one.

January 31, 2006 7:18 PM  
Blogger Erin said...

Thanks!

February 01, 2006 12:29 AM  

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