September 27, 2005

Two short poems.

Philosophical Optometry

His eyes were made unfortunately small
Through the thick, convex lenses
That pinched and pried at photon waves.

For one, clarity.
For another, distortion.
Like any lens.

...........

There Must Be Beauty

There must be beauty
behind our clumsy,
sexually loaded game.

Slightly averted eyes
speak their own rhymes;
how we love hating love.

But for the beauty,
I would nod to the loss
and walk off this field.

3 Comments:

Blogger Jason + Tiff said...

Erin,
I'm sorry for not commenting on your poetry before!
completely... beautiful!
:)

September 30, 2005 1:22 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I also feel the need to make my appreciation more visible.

The second one, especially, had a few well-oiled bits.

September 30, 2005 5:28 PM  
Blogger Erin said...

Thanks to you both. I appreciate the feedback, and I'm glad you liked them!

September 30, 2005 5:42 PM  

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